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A time to move on
A time of redemption
When we die
We may move on to another life
Up or down we are still around
The spirit of the weak
The spirit of a protector
Watching over all
Though we may not see the death
We feel the death
We honor the death
Someday we will be death
Don’t be afraid because today is not your day
Maybe tonight
Don’t fret for that I may say
She watches you now like a full moon
In a big open night sky
Her stars as mini flash lights
Peaking on the souls of those lost
Death is there
Here
Everywhere
Not bad, but it is sad
A place to go to piece
For all the nail covered paths we have crossed
There is now a strait road of cloud
Take it when the time comes
Don’t look back or be afraid
Ease is here to take you away
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Another dark poem I wrote in my free time. Would love some comments on how to improve my poems or new ideas
© 2012 - 2024 1DarkAngel3
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I enjoyed reading this. I'm new to "DeviantArt", but I think it's important we stay in the loop when reviewing each other's work. Especially when that work is in the form of literature. I had two questions/comments. When you said "Peaking on the souls of those lost" did you mean peeking*? Also, in the line that reads, "A place to go to piece", did you mean peace*? I guess in both cases, either could work, but I was just curious. I think death is a great part of life (yes life) to examine. I like how you left it open-ended since we don't know what's to come, but any way you look at it, death is final. Great work. I'll stay tuned.